What kind of buyer I am?
This is a very difficult topic for me, because i think my habits are changing this last year.
I want to tell you.
I used to go shopping 3 or 4 times a month, i loved it. I enjoy myself when I spent a lor of hours around the shops, try more clothes and buy some of them. I was a little spender. I spent my afternoons at the shopping centre.
But now I am changging this habit, I think now I am saved because I don´t going to shopping, only when there are offers. I buy by internet only the things that i really need, and I don´t buy some objects that I don´t afford it.
I never should have bought a electrical bycicle because i never use it. one day a few years ago, my brother and I stayed bored at cold winter morning and we decided to went shopping to a big shopping centre and.I don´t know what is happened but we returned home with one electrical bycicle that we have never used.
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What kind of buyer I am?
This is a very difficult topic for me because i think my habits have been changing this last year.I want to tell you. (Might say instead "Let me explain.")
I used to go shopping 3 or 4 times a month. I loved it. I enjoyed myself when I spent a lot of hours at the shops, trying
But now I am changing this habit. I think now I am saved because I don´t go
I never should have bought an electrical bicycle because i never use it. One day, a few years ago, my brother and I
Good work Macarena! Just a few minor corrections.
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What kind of buyer am I?
This is a very difficult topic for me, because I i think my habits are changing this last year.I want to tell you about it.
I used to go shopping 3 or 4 times a month, I i loved it. I enjoyed myself when I spending a lot of hours in around the shops, trying on more clothes and buying some of them. I was a big little spender. I spent my afternoons at the shopping centre (you could also say mall, which is more common).
But now I am changing this habit. I think now I am a saver now because I don´t always go to shopping, only when there are offers ("discounts" is probably more common). I buy by internet only the things that I i really need online, and I don´t buy what some objects that I can't don´t afford it.
I never should have bought an electrical bicycle because I i never use it. One day a few years ago, my brother and I were stayed bored. It was a cold winter morning and we decided to go went shopping at to a big shopping centre. and.I don´t know what is happened but we returned home with an one electrical bicycle that we have never used.
Comments:
Watch out for capitalization (for example, the pronoun "I" is always capitalized) and tenses. Good job and keep writing!
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