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Practice - An interesting historic place
If you are interested in China’s modern history, there is a place you have to go to/must go to/. The name (of the place) is/The place is called Nanjing Presidential Residence/Nanjing Presidential Palace. Nanjing Presidential Residence is located at on Changjiang Road in the city of Nanjing, Jiangsu province, in southeast of China. Up to now, It’s over six hundred years old. In the Presidential Residence, there comprises are three pieces of scenery (what do you mean here?) scenic spots (提’景点‘)/exhibits (提‘展览品’), all over them of which are both special. ('Both' refers to two items, e.g. The Summer Palace and the Forbidden City are both located in Beijing.)Since From the beginning of the Ming dynasty to the modern Chinese history, there are /you can find (so) many stories in here, and also records of the lives of many well-known figures people’s life in Chinese history. Because of these special peoples /famous people and their wonderful stories, as times goes on went on/passed, the Presidential Residence is becoming became/has become more and more special and (more) interesting than any other historic place/more and more special and interesting. ('More and more' is not used comparatively; it means 'increasingly' or 'progressively', e.g. As the date of the exam neared, she became more and more nervous. If you want to compare two things, then you should use 'more... than,' e.g. This film is more popular than that one.)
Today, it was (re)opened to the world public as the Nanjing Museum of Modern Chinese History.
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Practice - An interesting historic place
If you interested in China’s modern history, there a place you must have to go. The name is Nanjing Presidential Residence. Nanjing Presidential Residence is located at on Changjiang road in the city of Nanjing, Jiangsu province, southeast of China. Up to now, It’s over six hundred years old. In the Presidential Residence, there are comprises three exhibits pieces of scenery, all of over them are both special.
Since the beginning of the Ming dynasty to the modern Chinese history, there are so many stories in here, and also records of many well-known figures' people’s life lives in Chinese history. Because of these special peoples and their wonderful stories, as times goes on, the Presidential Residence has become is becoming more and more special and interesting than any other historic place.
Today, it was opened to the world as the Nanjing Museum of Modern Chinese History. If you are interested in going interesting about that place or interested interesting in some special persons or their life and their stories, such as Chiang Kai-Shek or Sun Yan-Sen, or … if you just want to visit the official exhibits of with the Ming and Qing dynasties, this is the place to go. Here is a good choice!
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