The 18 th of Februrary.
It has been exactly 3 months since I arrived in Australia. I was looking at the pictures in Perth and Fremantle. It was so weird because the time really went fast. Yesterday, I was not in the mood to talk to anybody. Here in Australia, the life goes slowly and everything is quiet and realxing. Comparing to Korea, The way of everything is different. I felt nervous because I have never felt relaxing in my life. Honestly, I feel lonely. It has been 2months since I moved a lot. This is my 7th place. I am helping their work and they provide me food and board. It is a good chance to learn their life but I am still new here.. Everytime I go somewhere, I get easily bored and eager to find something new. The host family is good and we always have a meal together but I don't know why I am so lonely...
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The 18th of Februrary.
It has been exactly 3 months since I arrived in to Australia. I was looking at the pictures in of Perth and Fremantle. It was so weird because the time really went passed fast. Yesterday, I was not in the a mood to talk to anybody. Here in Australia, the life goes slowly and everything is quiet and realxing relaxing. Comparing to Korea, The way of everything is different. I felt nervous because I have never felt relaxing relaxed in my life. Honestly, I feel lonely. It has been 2months since I moved a lot again (?). This is my 7th place. I am helping with their (who are they? you have not introduced anyone in the text before) work and they provide me with food and board. It is a good chance to learn become familiar with their life but I am still new here.. Everytime I go somewhere, I get easily bored and eager to find something new. The host family is good and we always have a meal together but I don't know why I am so lonely...Hi, here is some correction from me. I have to admit I am not sure if I understood the whole context and what you wanted to say. See my comments in orange. Otherwise, good work.
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The 18th of Februrary Februrary
It has been exactly 3 three [numbers under 10 should be spelled out] months since I arrived in Australia. I was looking at the pictures in of Perth and Fremantle [did you take the pictures? were they from a book? you could describe more...]. It was so weird because the time really went by fast [this is ok but "...the time went by really fast" is better].[new paragraph because new thought] Yesterday, I was not in the a mood to talk to anybody [why?].
[another new paragraph] Here in Australia, the life goes by slowly and everything is quiet and realxing relaxing. Comparing Compared [this needs to be past tense] to Korea, The way of everything is different.
[new paragraph] I felt nervous because I have never felt relaxing relaxed [should be past tense] in my life. Honestly, I feel lonely.
[new paragraph] It has been 2 two months since I last moved. a lot. I have moved a lot; this is my 7th seventh place I have lived in during the past ___ years.
[new paragraph] I am helping their [who?] work and they provide me food room and board [the idiom is "room and board." It includes food] . It is a good chance to learn about their life but I am still new here.. Every time I go somewhere, I get easily bored and become eager to find something new. The host family is good and we always have a meal together but I don't know why I am so lonely...
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Hi! Good sentence structure! Here are some other ideas for how you could write it in informal English:
The 18th of February.
It has been exactly 3 months since I arrived in Australia. I was looking at the pictures in of Perth and Fremantle. It was so weird because the time I lived there really went fast. Yesterday, I was not in the mood to talk to anybody. Here in Australia, the life goes slowly and everything is quiet and relaxing. Comparing Compared to Korea, the way of everything is different. I felt nervous because I have never felt relaxing relaxed in my life. Honestly, I feel lonely. It has been 2 months since I moved a lot again. This is my 7th place. I am helping my host family with their work and they provide me with food room and board. It is a good chance to learn about their life but I am still new here. Every time I go somewhere, I get easily bored and eager to find something new. The host family is good and we always have a meal together, but I don't know why I am so lonely...In the situation of "room and board", the word "board" refers to food that is provided, so that's why you'd need to say "room and board".
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