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A Bad Day It is a bad day. My phone was broken with water damage. I remember putting my phone on the table But when I picked it up later, it was found the phone was dead and with water on it. I did not realize what happened then. I remembered the table was dry, but I am not sure. there is another possiblity my two-years old son poured water on the table and I just did not see. or something unknown happened In the concidence , I will go human resourse market tomorry. that would be inconvient without a handset. My God what should I do ? it is really frustrating. In the meantime my wife is busy and could not give me her cellphone. Just like an old chinese saying goes that "Misfortunes never come singly ,when it rains it pours"

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A Bad Day

Today was a bad day.My phone broke due to water damage. I remember putting my phone on the table but when I picked it up later,I found it to be broken and with water on it.  I did not realize what happened then. I remembered the table was dry, but I am not sure. there is another possiblity that  my two-year old son poured water on the table and I just did not see, or something unknown happened


In the concidence  (I don't know what you mean, but you are using this word wrong) , I will go human resources market tomorrow. that would be inconvient without a handset. My God what should I do ? it is really frustrating. In the meantime my wife is busy and could not give me her cellphone. 

Just like the old chinese saying goes that "Misfortunes never come in singles ,when it rains it pours"


NOTE: Paragraphs a typically 3-5 sentances long. Most of yours by themself were a little short to be considered a paragraph. So, I put the first two togther. Consider editing though.

Keep up the good work!

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