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After the spring festival,I have to go back to school for my paper .During every festival i always put on weight 8 lbs ,but it is a amazing that i just weight 3lbs in this spring festival.That is a good news for me .
My paper and Japanese Language Proficiency Test will be finished before July ,and things not going well.In order to complete the tasks,i make the plans for them.The plan is detailed,it contain many information that i need .One thing into 4 parts,such as Japanese words,grammar rule, literature review and writing.The Japanese grammar rule always seem to be hard to me .According to my meeting with trouble over language learning,this plan have much more change than before.I ready to be run.
In 2016,i hope that i can achieve my aim.Reading much more books,keep on take exercise and have a good travel.Thanks for happiness life.Every thing will be better.
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The starting
After the spring festival,I have to go back to school for my paper .During every festival i always put on weight 8 lbs ,but it is a amazing that i just weight gained 3lbs in during this spring festival.That is a good news for me .My paper and Japanese Language Proficiency Test will be finished before July ,and but things are not going well.In order to complete the tasks,i have to make the plans for them.The plan is detailed,it contain many information that i need .One thing is divided into 4 parts,such as Japanese words,grammar rules, literature review and writing.The Japanese grammar rules always seem to be hard to me .According to my meeting with trouble over language learning,this plan have much more change than before.I ready to be run.????
In 2016,i hope that i can achieve my aims.Reading much many more books,keep on take exercise exercising and have a good enjoying my travels.Thanks for happiness life.Every thing will be better.
I didn't correct everything. What do you mean by 'One thing'. Do you mean the test? Is the test divided into 4 parts?
Also, the word 'I' should always be capitalized. Good luck with your goals!
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