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The stranger. Part 22. I couldn't saying anything (or something?) "Damian! Your eyes looks mad!" Liza talked with me for a some time. I couldn't remember that she told me. I just sat in my bed trying to calm down. Later I found out that she tried to find the cave by oneself. It wasn't successful. Early in the eveneng I had calm down and I decided to walk around the town. I won't tell you the dialogues, but I'll tell wtat I heard from them. These people looked like very glad, They liked own lifestyle, they glorified their major, they enjoyed.. As I understood each day was like other one in the town. The clock was going upon the circle... "The time had come to get away..." I thought. "we MUST to escape as early (or quickly?) as possible" I walked through the town till the sunset, Then I came to the house, where we had stayed. "Liza, we need going. Now!" "Damian, don't worry. I know, last nightmare scared you. Be calm." "No, nightmare is here." Liza didn't want to agree with me so I stuck (took?) her hand and pulled to the exit. Knowing her past I understood that was the hardest task. She was very strong and tough... I had managed to get away with Liza on my hands. When we arrived the forest she decided to walk without my help. "I'll explain you about everithing later" I said Maryam, this story to you

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The stranger. Part 22.

I couldn't saying anything (or something? "Something" doesn't work here)
"Damian! Your eyes looks mad!"
Liza talked with me for a some time. I couldn't remember that what she told me. I just sat in my bed trying to calm down.


Later I found out that she tried to find the cave by oneself herself. It wasn't successful. Early in the evening I had calmed down and I decided to walk around the town. I won't tell you the dialogues ("what they said exactly" would sound more natural than "dialogues"), but I'll tell what I heard from them. These people looked like very glad. They liked their own lifestyle, they glorified their major (what do you mean by "major" here?), they enjoyed.. As I understood it, each day was like any other one in the town. Time always went in circles.


"The time had has come to get away..." I thought. "we MUST to escape as early (or quickly?) as possible" (Both "early" and "quickly" are possible, but they mean different things. You probably mean "quickly" i.e. as soon as possible. "Early" would mean early in the morning here)


I walked through the town till the sunset. Then I came to the house, where we had stayed.
"Liza, we need to get going. Now!"
"Damian, don't worry. I know, last nightmare scared you. Be calm."
"No, a nightmare is here."
Liza didn't want to agree with me, so I stuck took her hand and pulled her to the exit. Knowing her past I understood that was the hardest task. She was very strong and tough...
I had managed to get away with Liza on my hands. When we arrived at the forest she decided to walk without my help.
"I'll explain you about everything to you later," I said.

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The stranger. Part 22.

I couldn't saying anything (or something?)
"Damian! Your eyes looks mad crazy!"
Liza (maybe "Lisa" would be a better name for an English-speaking audience) talkedspoke with me for a some time. I couldn't remember twhat she told me. I just sat in my bed trying to calm down.
Later I found out that she had tried to find the cave by oneherself. ItShe wasn't successful. Early in the evenieng, I had to calm downcool off (perhaps better to avoid repetition) and so I decided to walk around the town. I won't tell you the dialogues, but I'll tell wthat I heard from them. These people looked like very glad, They liked their own lifestyle, they glorified their major, and they enjoyed.. As far as I understood, each day was like other oneany other in the town. The clock was going upon the circle...
"The time had come to get away..." I thought. "wWe MUST to escape as early (or quickly?) as possible."

Apologies, I didn't have time to correct the rest. I will try to do this as soon as possible.

Let me know if you have any questions!

Best wishes and good luck!

Rob


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The stranger. Part 22.

I couldn't saying anything (or something?)
"Damian! Your eyes looks mad crazy!"
Liza (maybe "Lisa" would be a better name for an English-speaking audience) talkedspoke with me for a some time. I couldn't remember twhat she told me. I just sat in my bed trying to calm down.
Later I found out that she had tried to find the cave by oneherself. ItShe wasn't successful. Early in the evenieng, I had to calm downcool off (perhaps better to avoid repetition) and so I decided to walk around the town. I won't tell you the dialogues, but I'll tell wthat I heard from them. These people looked like very glad, They liked their own lifestyle, they glorified their major, and they enjoyed.. As far as I understood, each day was like other oneany other in the town. The clock was going upon the circle... 
"The time had come to get away..." I thought. "wWe MUST to escape as early (or quickly?) as possible."

I walked through the town till theuntil sunset, Then I came to the house, where we had stayed.
"Lizsa, we need goingto go... Now!"
"Damian, don't worry. I know, the last nightmare scared you. Be calm."
"No, the nightmare is here."
Lizsa didn't want to agree with me, so I stuck (took?) her hand and pulled her to the exit. Knowing her past, I understood that it was the hardest task. She was very strong and tough...
I had managed to get away with Lizsa on my handsarm. When we arrived at the forest, she decided to walk without my help.
"I'll explain everythingyou about everithing later" I said.

Maryam, this is my story to you
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