Just advice !!
When I was beginning to learn English I had a lot of motivation well I mean everything that you make is perfect you have courage disposition willpower and especially claw to continue your dream. however in the half of way this dream become from the truth because learn a new language requires first patience dedication and focus in your objective. However I mean never give up though it may be long the walk some obstacles will seems but always remember the real sense Yes I can :D
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Just advice !!
When I was beginning to learn English I had a lot of motivation. Well, I mean, everything that you make is *perfect. You have courage,disposition, and willpower and especially to claw the way to continue your dream. **However, in the around half-way this dream will become from the truth. because Learning a new language requires first patience, then dedication and focusing in on your objective. However, ***I mean, never give up; though it may be a long the walk. **** Some obstacles will seems difficult but always remember the real sense, 'Yes I can' :D*Not sure what to fix here
** Alternate sentence structure: However, around half-way, this dream will become easier said than done.
*** "I mean" is not exactly necessary here
**** Or perhaps, 'Some obstacles will seem difficult, but always remember that you can do it no matter what.
You're doing great. :D
Best wishes,
Gracie
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