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CAE writing - report. Please correct if I have done mistakes You have just completed six months in a new job. In preparation for a progress meeting, you have been asked to write a report to your manager. Your report should explain what you feel you have achieved in the job so far, describe any problems you have had, and suggest any future training that would be suitable. Report The purpose of this report is to describe what have I achieved and learned in the telecommunication lead generation position. I have recently completed six months in the position. The report also discusses difficulties I have faced in order to improve my working methods. First of all, I want to mention, that the intensive training period gave me strong basic knowledge of working as a lead. The training was focused on the methods of getting customer interested in our products. I learned how to give a good sales pitch, in order to impress the customers. In fact, the most important thing I learned in the training was to set up a meeting between the customers and our sales team. Secondly, I want to describe the difficult issues in work. Despite the fact, that the training was very well organised and comprehensive, I had various difficulties in the current job. The most difficult matter in the work turned out to be to schedule the appointments connecting the sales team and customer. The customer often wanted to consider whether to invite the sales team to introduce our products or not. In conclusion, I have gained a good basic knowledge for the position. Despite the fact, that I have good basic lead know-how, I strongly recommend to set up another training focused barely on closing the lead process. It would make a big difference for the lead team. In fact it would ensue increasing amount of appointments and sales.

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CAE writing - report. Please correct if I have done made mistakes

You have just completed six months in a new job. In preparation for a progress meeting, you have been asked to write a report to your manager. Your report should explain what you feel you have achieved in the job so far, describe any problems you have had, and suggest any future training that would be suitable.


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The purpose of this report is to describe what have I I have achieved and learned in the telecommunication lead generation position. I have recently completed six months in the position. The report also discusses difficulties I have faced in order to improve improving my working methods.

First of all, I want to mention, that the intensive training period gave me strong basic knowledge of working as a lead. The training was focused on the methods of getting the customer interested in our products. I learned how to give a good sales pitch, in order to impress the customers. In fact, the most important thing I learned in the training was to set up a meeting between the customers and our sales team.

Secondly, I want to describe the difficult issues in the work. Despite the fact, that the training was very well organised and comprehensive, I had various difficulties in the current job. The most difficult matter in the work on the job turned out to be to schedule scheduling the appointments connecting the sales team and customer. The customer often wanted to consider whether to invite the sales team to introduce our products or not.

In conclusion, I have gained a good basic level of knowledge for the position. Despite the fact, that I have good basic lead know-how knowledge on the lead process, I strongly recommend to set setting up another further training focused barely solely on closing the lead process. It would make a big difference for the lead team. In fact it would ensue ensure increasing an increased amount number of appointments and sales.

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