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It is better for the children to grow up in the countryside tan in a big city? It is better for the children to grow up in the countryside tan in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. May the place where somebody lives affect one´s behavior? I´m completely agree wherefore if we compare a guy form the countryside between someone from the city, we will realize the big differences for this reason in my point of view I am not sure to growing somebody up in the countryside will be the best choice. The bases of my disagreement are social, psychologic and personal. First of all, it is known that guys´ behavior form countryside is less developed than guys ‘from city. It is because of many factors like: people that are surrendering them not are the same who are in the city; environment that they have been developing is not as similar as city´s because country people have other priorities and the last and not less important things that they use are completely different because they live other reality. Other reason is that, many guys from countryside think different as child from city, it means that they are not get to use to view a whole world, a world composed by good and bad things, good and bad people, a world where if you are not clever you are not be successful, so they will not be able to leave their small world which is bordered. Thirdly, if you live in a small town in the countryside you will see the same people every day it perhaps may become pretty bored. On the other hand, if you live in a big city you will meet a lot of people every day as a result it is really fun for instance, my cousin lives in Machachi, a town from Quito countryside, He is really outgoing but he is limited to see the same people every day and it is bored to hang out with his same friends form his town and when he comes to Quito, he is really keen on meeting new people and new things. Finally, I think that people who live in the countryside are completely different to who’s live in city, their thoughts are not similar and their preferences are pointed in different ways. For these reasons If you ask me, where do you prefer to grow up a child, in the city or the countryside I will firmly answer you I prefer the city because it has more features and chances to be successful than in the countryside.

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It is  Is it better for the children to grow up in the countryside tan or in a big city?

It is better for the children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
May the place where somebody lives affect one´s behavior? I´m completely agree wherefore that if we compare a guy form the countryside between with someone from the city, we will realize the big differences, for this reason, in my point of view, I am not sure if growing raising somebody up in the countryside will be the best choice. The bases basis of my disagreement are is social, psychological and personal.
First of all, it is known that guys´ behavior from the countryside is less developed than guys‘ from the city. It is because of many factors like: people that are surrendering surrounding them not are the same as those who are in the city, the environment that they have been developing developed in is not as similar as the city´s, because country people have other priorities and the last and no less important things that they use are completely different because they live in another reality.
Another reason is that, many guys from the countryside think differently as child from those in the city, it means that they are not getting  exposed to a different world view, to use to view a whole world, a world composed by good and bad things, good and bad people, a world where if you are not clever you are not be successful, so they will not be able to leave their small world which is bordered.
Thirdly, if you live in a small town in the countryside you will see the same people every day it perhaps may become pretty boring. On the other hand, if you live in a big city you will meet a lot of people every day, as a result it is really fun for instance, my cousin lives in Machachi, a town from Quito countryside, He is really outgoing but he is limited to seeing the same people every day and it is boring to hang out with his same friends from his town and when he comes to Quito, he is really keen on meeting new people and new things.
Finally, I think that people who live in the countryside are completely different to those who live in a city, their thoughts are not similar and their preferences are pointed in different ways. For these reasons If you ask me, where do you prefer to grow up a child, in the city or the countryside I will firmly answer you I prefer the city because it has more features and chances to be successful than in the countryside.

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