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Hi, i´m preparing to take TOEFL test. Please help checking this essay and grade it thanks alot. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Nowadays, education is an important thing in our society, many people say that the best that parents may give to their children is it, due to the fact in our environment if you do not have a profession or a degree you cannot get a good job. I firmly believe that people attend college or university to get a degree, a good education and consequently in the future they good get a good job. The bases of my point of view are personal social and financial. First of all, going to the university you will get career preparation, it means that you will learn new things that will help you developing yourself as a result you will become a good professional, for many people this is one of their principals objectives in the life and going to the university you will achieve it. Other reason, we live in a society where the success is measured by the things that you have got, for instance, my brother, David, was a technician, he studied abroad. However, he just got an Associate degree; he was working at Caterpillar Company like a simple technician, our relatives usually said that he put a lot of effort studying abroad but he is just a “horse of work”, but when he got his engineering everybody said that he is a successful man. On the other hand, mi cousin, Pablo, got a master’s degree so all my extended family think that he is more successful than my brother, though both are working in the same thing. The society measures in order to get degrees and things. The last field is financial, in my point of view, if you have good education, you will get a good job and as usual you will earn money. People who are surrendering me, they got bad education, currently, they do not have a good job and they work really hard and earn few money. To sum up, I think that people attend college or university to get career preparation, get a degree it means they will get a good job and obviously they will earn money without working a lot.

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