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Yesterday I saw Yesterday i saw a cat was dead on the street while driving. I am a big fan of cat, so that made me really down, and I just wanted to know how to describe it in English. I drive to my office everyday. It's sad, but i couldn't understand it was a cat until I really go close to her, because she was crushed badly and tored into many bricks. I just wish and pray that her soul rested in peace.

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Yesterday I saw

Yesterday i saw a cat was dead  (I saw a dead cat) on the street while driving. I am a big fan of cat (cats), so that made me really down, and I just wanted to know how to describe it in English. *** I drive to my office everyday. It's sad, but i couldn't understand it was a cat (... understand what had happened to the cat until...)until I really go (got) close to her, because she was crushed badly (had been)and tored into many bricks ****. I just wish and pray that her soul rested in peace. (I prayed that.... would rest)


*** Also possible: I wish I could describe how I felt about the incident.

**** Not exactly sure what you mean here but "tear into bricks" sounds a little odd in English. Maybe "crushed onto the pavement"?


It's a beautiful story, Shino. I felt moved by compassion reading it.

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