Oh one more correction I forgot: One day,I will visit Japan/ I will go to Japan.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi.

I am Yu-Ting.I am a university student.I am a quiet girl.Drawing is my favorite hobby.l like a quiet place,and hate a noisy voice.But like to listen to rock and roll music.For example, Jonas Brothers,Avril Lavigne,Miley Cyrus's........music.I also like Disney.I like Japan.Japan is my favorite country.One day,I will visit to Japan. My dream is to become an illustrator and a designer.

English idiom "Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties."

A/An = you use "a" when the first letter is a vowel like A, E, I, O, U, sometimes Y  and you use "an" when the first letter is a consonant, which are pretty much all the other letters in the English alphabet.

Make sure your sentences have a little more variation:
instead of starting with "I am" or "I like" . If you notice that you start most of your sentences in the same way try to think of another way you might possibly write what you want to say.