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The New Year It's been a long day without play italki. Those days I was busy, because the new year is come. I did many things, cleaning and so on. When I sent the video that about my uncle blowing firecrackers to my other countries' friends, they were amazed. They said it's unbelievable. =^_^= Also I went my grandparents' home to eat with my family. It was a beautiful time, we ate well. Yesterday I watched scary movies with my brothers and sister. It's really scary, then when we prepare to go to bed they are scared, so that night we slept together, crowded....Haha but funny. I really want to the time can be more, but today I have to go home, so I said goodbye to them. T^T

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The New Year

It's been a long day without play italki. It's been a long time since I've last visited italki. Those days I was busy recently, because the new year is was come coming. I did many things, cleaning, ... , ... and so on. (usually when you use "so on", you should list a few examples.) When I sent the video that about my uncle blowing (lighting?) firecrackers to my other countries' friends, they were amazed. They said it's it was unbelievable. =^_^=
Also, I went to my grandparents' home to eat with my family. It was a beautiful time, we ate well.
Yesterday, I watched scary movies with my brothers and sister. It's It was really scary. Then, when we were prepared to go to bed they are were scared, so that night we slept together, crowded (or you can say "sleep together in a crowd) ....Haha but funny. I really want to wish the time we spent together can could be more longer, but today I have had to go home, so I said goodbye (or "bid farewell") to them. T^T

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