Exercise
That night, there was a sad boy who was looking nowhere, alone standing outside the rich school.
A black car which had no lights, slowly stopped in front of him.
3 scary persons when got off the car, kidnapped him fast.
When they arrived only the small, tiny boy who has non expression face, surprisingly got off the car.
He barely looked at the old building in front of him, which was nearly to get down.
He hardly touched the rusted door´s knob, which hd like a smile expression.
A creepy rabbit that has big ears, suddenly appeared in the top to the wood door.
The white rabbit wich had big mouth softly ask him the worst riddle.
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That night, there was a sad boy who was starring, alone standing outside a rich school.A black car, which had no lights, suddenly stopped in front of him.
Three scary looking people, got out of the car and kidnapped him quickly.
When they arrived, only the small, tiny boy had a scary expression on his face, when he got out of the car.
He barely looked at the old building in front of him, which was in dilapidated condition
He hardly touched the rusted door knob. which had like a smile expression sueno extraño. no entendí.
A creepy rabbit with big ears, suddenly appeared at the top of the wood door.
The white rabbit which had big mouth, softly told him the worst riddle.
dilapidated arruinado
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That night, a sad boy was staring into nothing, standing alone outside the rich school.A black car, which had no lights, slowly stopped in front of him.
Three scary people got out of the car quickly and kidnapped him.
Surprisingly, when they arrived, only the tiny boy with the expressionless face got out of the car.
He barely looked at the old building in front of him, which was run-down (??).
He hardly touched the rusted doorknob, which had a smile-like expression. (#the boy, or the doorknob?)
A creepy rabbit that had big ears suddenly appeared in the top of the wooden door.
The white rabbit, which had a big mouth, softly asked him the worst riddle.
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