IELTS Letter - 09/02
Hi everyone. I wrote this recommendation letter as a practice for the IELTS test. I would appreciate your comments.
To Whom It May Concern,
With great pleasure I write this letter to support the application of my former employee, Bic Mitchum to the MBA at the Shanghai Business School.
During the last six years I have had the chance to appreciate the professional growth of Bic going from an IT Analyst to an IT Operations Professional and ultimately to an IT Quality Professional.
In 2010 Bic joined to Microsoft trough an outsourcing company as an IT Analyst. During the last five years, he has stood out for his intellectual skills, adaptability and proactiveness along with a deep sense of engagement and a continuous desire to improve. Therefore, the company has not hesitated to promote him to work as an IT Operations Professional where he developed the role of Datacenter Administrator. In this position he demonstrated his leadership abilities, managing a team of 8 analysts and 2 professionals. In 2014 he applied for a new position as an IT Quality Professional. His broad knowledge of the IT infrastructure as well as his management abilities allowed him to get that position, were he is performing until now.
I wholeheartedly recommend Bic as a prospective business student. He will add a great deal to any business class. I can also envision Bic as a highly competent manager someday, which I say as a high compliment indeed. I therefore recommend him for admission to the MBA program at the Shanghai Business School.
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IELTS Letter - 09/02
Hi everyone. I wrote this recommendation letter as a practice for the IELTS test. I would appreciate your comments.To Whom It May Concern,
With great pleasure I write this letter to support the application of my former employee, Bic Mitchum to the MBA program at the Shanghai Business School.
During the last six years I have had the chance to appreciate the professional growth of Bic as he progressed from a position as going from an IT Analyst to an IT Operations Professional and ultimately to an IT Quality Professional.
In 2010 Bic joined to Microsoft as a contract trough an outsourcing company as an IT Analyst. During the last five years, he has stood out for his intellectual skills, adaptability and pro-activeness along with a deep sense of engagement and a continuous desire to improve. Therefore, the company did not hesitate has not hesitated to promote him to work as an IT Operations Professional where he developed the role of Datacenter Administrator. In this position he demonstrated his leadership abilities by managing a team of 8 analysts and 2 professionals. In 2014 he applied for a new position as an IT Quality Professional. His broad knowledge of the IT infrastructure as well as his management abilities got him allowed him to get that position in which were he is still serving. performing until now.
I wholeheartedly recommend Bic as a prospective business student. He will add a great deal to any business class. I can also envision Bic as a highly competent manager someday, which I say as a high compliment indeed. I therefore recommend him for admission to the MBA program at the Shanghai Business School.
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