where today’s food comes from ?
sometimes we find our food have a strange taste as we did not use to it while we was young so we hated the taste of most of foods .
what should we do ?
this status because the new farming methods which make the food go rotten and damaged by diseases so must stop using this way ( using chemicals ) in our farms
and we must improve the quality of crops
and making genetic modifications
we must stop the rot of our society , there is no choice because after few years there will be starvation and then war so the only way to avoid that is doing our best
we must not let people starve
thank you
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Where does today’s food comes from?
Sometimes we find that our food have has a strange taste as because we did not use to eat it while we was when were young(Better way to put is would be: because we did not grow up eating it), so we hated the taste of most of foods .what should we do ? (or more appropriately, what are we supposed to do)
this status because the new farming methods which make the food go rotten and damaged by diseases so must stop using this way ( using chemicals ) in our farms (The new farming methods make the food or produce rot and susceptible to diseases. For that reason we must stop using chemicals on our farms). and We must improve the quality of crops
and making genetic modifications (Not sure if you want the crops to be genetically modified, or you want to stop genetic modification of crops here. If you want the crops to be genetically modified, then you would say: We must make genetic modifications to improve the quality of crops/crop quality. If the idea is to do away with genetic modification, then you would say: We must stop genetically modifying the crops to improve the quality of our crops.
If your idea was to do both, that is to improve crop quality and genetically modify the crops then I would put it this way: We must genetically modify the crops, and we must improve the quality of the crops)
We must stop the rot of our society , there is no choice because after a few years, there will be starvation and then war, so the only way to avoid that is doing our best.
We must not let people starve
Thank you
Very nice piece, Alaa. I would watch out for PUNCTUATIONS (full stops, question marks, and so forth). Remember also in English, every sentence begins with a CAPITAL letter. For example where you say "we must not let people starve", it should be "We must not let people starve".
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Where Does Today's Food Come From ?
Sometimes we find our food has a strange taste not like it was when we were young so we hated the taste of most foods (??) .What should we do ?
This happens because the new farming methods make food go rotten and damaged by diseases. So we must stop using this way ( using chemicals ) in our farms .
And we must improve the quality of crops .
And making genetic modifications .
We must stop the rot of our society . There is no choice because after a few years there will be starvation and then war so the only way to avoid that is to do our best .
We must not let people starve .
thank you
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Where does today’s food comes from?
Sometimes we find that our food have has a strange taste as because we did were not use to it while when we were was young; so now we hated hate the taste of some foods more than others. most of foods .What should we do ?
this status because the new farming methods which make the food go rotten and damaged by diseases so We must stop using this way ( using chemicals) in on our farms because the produce can rot faster and the chemicals can make them more prone to diseases.
and We must improve the quality of crops
and making make genetic modifications.
We must stop the rot of our society; there is no choice because after few years there will be starvation and then war, so the only way to avoid starvation that is by doing our very best to try to stop it and that starts with the farms.
We must not let people starve starvation happen.
Thank you
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