A lonely man
Excuse me, can I have the bill? said the man to the waiter in the restaurant. The man was waiting a woman for a long time, but she didn't arrive, so he paid the bill and left the restaurant, later, he started walking on the street.
This man seems tall and dark, or at least, darker than the other people in the way. He has the hands on the pockets of his jacket and seems that he is keeping something in the pockets, maybe a gift for the woman that he was waiting in the restaurant.
The night is cold, so the man wil look a place for spend the night. In this street, he has found a bar, so he is going to enter in this place for drink something and maybe for to meet other woman. The man looked inside the bar and saw the woman that he was waiting in the restaurant. He stopped to think a moment, with his hands still in the pockets of the jacket. He entered in the bar and walked to the woman, suddenly he took out the hands of the pockets, it was a gun ...
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A lonely man
"Excuse me, can I have the bill?" said the man to the waiter in the restaurant. The man was had been waiting for a woman for a long time, but she didn't arrive, so he paid the bill and left the restaurant. Later, he started walking on the street.This man seems tall and dark, or at least, darker than the other people *in the way*. He has the his hands on in the pockets of his jacket and it seems that he is keeping something in the his pockets, maybe a gift for the woman that he was waiting for in the restaurant.
The night is cold, so the man will look for a place for to spend the night. In On this street, he has found a bar, so he is going to enter in this place go in for to drink something and maybe for to meet another woman. The man looked inside the bar and saw the woman that he was waiting for in the restaurant. He stopped to think a moment, with his hands still in the pockets of the jacket. He entered in the bar and walked toward the woman. Suddenly he took out the hands of the his hands out of his pockets, it was he was holding a gun ...
*Esto no tiene sentido. ¿Qué quieres decir en español?
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Un detallito: En el contexto de restaurantes, "bill" es la palabra correcta en inglés británico y canadiense. Pero si algún día come en un restaurante estadounidense, le van a presentar el "check".
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A lonely man
“Excuse me, can I have the bill?” said the man to the waiter in the restaurant. He had been waiting a long time for the woman, but she had never arrived, so he paid the bill and left the restaurant. Later, he started walking on the street.
This man seemed tall and dark, or at least darker than the other people in the area. He had his hands in the pockets of his jacket, and it seemed that he was keeping something in them, maybe a gift for the woman he had planned to meet in the restaurant.
The night was cold, so he looked for a place to spend the evening. On this street, he found a bar, so he entered it to have a drink or something, and maybe to meet a different woman. He looked inside the bar and saw the woman that he had been waiting for in the restaurant. He stopped to think a moment, with his hands still in his pockets. Then he entered the bar and walked toward the woman. Suddenly he took his hand out of his pocket. In it was a gun . . .
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