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Artificial Intelligence Google's AI DeepMind beat European Go champion. Go is a board game that has been considered to be one of the most difficult games to be mastered by AI. The development of AI is so fast today, so some people are thinking that computers will transcend humans and threaten us in the near future. I am going to consider whether this technological singularity will happen or not. Human brain is consists of about 100 billion neurons, and I think that human brain can be considered as an aggregation of simple mechanisms. We humans tends to think that we are special and different from computers, because we have consciousness. However, we don't know what the consciousness is. If we have consciousness, it will be natural to think that other living things also have consciousness, but we don't know the boundary between living things and non-living things. I think that consciousness can be considered as an aggregation of universal property that things have. This means all the things out there, including AI might have consciousness. If you roughly look at the function of human brain, it gets information from sensors, then compute, evaluate and memorize them and send signals. I think that highly developed AI will be able to do this. I would like to think that living things are not special, so I am looking forward to technological singularity happening. The development of AI might make us reconsider about the boundary between living things and non-living things. I would appreciate it if you would tell me your idea of AI.

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Google's AI DeepMind beat European Go champion. Go is a board game that has been considered to be one of the most difficult games to be mastered by AI. The development of AI is so fast today, so that some people are thinking that computers will transcend humans and threaten us in the near future. I am going to consider whether this technological singularity will happen or not.

The Human brain is consists of about 100 billion neurons, and I think that human brain it can be considered as an aggregation of simple mechanisms. We humans tends to think that we are special and different from computers, because we have consciousness. However, we don't know what the consciousness is. If we have consciousness, it will be natural to think that other living things also have consciousness, but we don't know the boundary between living things and non-living things. I think that consciousness can be considered as an aggregation of universal property properties (if it's aggregation it should be of several things, therefore plural) that things have. This means all the things everything out there, including AI might have consciousness. If you roughly look at the function of the human brain, it gets information from sensors, then computes, evaluates and memorizes them it and sends signals. I think that highly developed AI will be able to do this. I would like to think that living things are not special, so I am looking forward to technological singularity happening. The development of AI might make us reconsider about the boundary between living things and non-living things.

I would appreciate it if you would tell me your idea of AI.

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Very good text and overall very well written. Even though I marked some things I understood your argument and you expressed yourself very well.

Regarding what you wrote, the idea that living beings are inherently different from inanimate matter is called vitalism. Basically it says that there is something more to the material world other than Physics. This is basically frowned upon by the scientific establishment nowadays.

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