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This afternoon This afternoon,I did push-ups and plank.I love doing exercises!And I have abdominal muscles now.I hope that I can be stronger and have a healthy body! That's why I love doing exercises!\(^o^)/

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This afternoon

This afternoon,I did push-ups and plank.I love doing exercises!And I have abdominal muscles now.I hope that I can be stronger and have a healthy body! That's why I love doing exercises!\(^o^)/


This afternoon, I did push-ups and did a plank. I love doing exercises! And I have abdominal muscles now. I hope that I can be stronger and have a healthy body! That's why I love doing exercises!\(^o^)/


Nothing wrong here, but not all English speakers would know what a plank is in terms of exercise. I think it would be called "doing a plank" or "planking," which makes it a bit more clear. I added spaces between your sentences.




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