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The rain had been watering us while we went down the street. I thought it could be better for us to wring clothes out in some hidden place, but we didn't find any. Suddenly, the rain was stopped and people started to appear from everywhere. All of them rushed by there deals didn't ever pay attention on us. All things around us were returning to casual life.
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The rain had been watering us while we went down the street. I thought it could be better for us to wring clothes out in some hidden place, but we didn't find any. Suddenly, the rain was stopped and people started to appear from everywhere. All of them rushed by there deals didn't ever pay attention on us. All things around us were returning to casual life.Lots of different ways to say this:
The rain had been watering It had been raining on us while we went down the street. I thought it could be better for us to wring our clothes out in some hidden place, but we didn't find any. Suddenly, the rain was stopped and people started to appear from everywhere. All of them rushed by preoccupied with their own business and there deals didn't ever pay any attention on to us. All things around us were returning to casual life.
You could also say "The rain had been pouring on us........" if you want to stress that there was a lot of rain. "Watering" is only used for plants. You could also say "normal life," but "casual life" is more unusual and sounds good.
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The rain had been pouring down on us / drenching us while we went down the street. I thought it could / would (depending on which you actually mean) be better for us to wring out our clothes in some hidden place, but we didn't (or "but we couldn't") find one. Suddenly, the rain was stopped and people started to appear from everywhere. All of them rushed by; they didn't even pay attention to us. All things around us returned to casual life.Want to progress faster?
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