My pet
My family has a dog, actually it is my sister's pet. His name is Sansão. His name means he is the strongest dog in the whole world. It's a joke of course because he is not like that hero of the biblic stories.
I don't like very much Sansão, although I like dogs a lot. Sansão is not a kind of dog which receive people in a happy mood. He just sleep and eat many times a day. Now he is fat and it isn't good for his health.
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My pet
My family has a dog, but it is actually it is my sister's pet. His name is Sansão. His name means and this means that he is the strongest dog in the whole world. It's obviously a joke of course because he is not like the heroes from the bible that hero of the biblic stories.I don't like very much Sansão very much, although even though I like dogs a lot. Sansão is not a the kind of dog which receive greets people in a happy mood. He just sleeps and eats many times a day a lot throughout the day. Now he is fat and it this isn't good for his health.
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My Pet
My family has a dog, actually it is my sister's pet. His name is Sansão. His name means he is the strongest dog in the whole world. It's a joke of course because he is not like that hero of the Biblical stories.I don't like Sansão very much, although I like dogs a lot. Sansão is not a the kind of dog which receives people in a happy mood. He just sleeps and eats many times a all day. Now he is fat and it that isn't good for his health.
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My pet
My family has a dog, actually it is my sister's pet. His name is Sansão. His name means he is the strongest dog in the whole world. It's a joke of course because he is not like the hero's that we watch them on tv or we read about them in booksI don't like Sansão very much , although I like dogs a lot. Sansão is not that kind of dogs which receive people in a happy mood. He just sleep and eat many times a day. Now he is fat and it is not good for his healthy
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