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The day was interesting. I go to my grandma and help her to cook. She says me "Thanks!". I love my grandmother. After, I with my friend Pavel go to shopping and bought two T-shorts and skirt.We eats soup and salad in cafe I was tired and go to home. I watch TV and cooked pancakes, they are tasty. I go to bed in 11:00 pm.
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This day was interesting. I go to my grandma and help her to cook. She says "Thanks!". I love my grandmother. After my friend Pavel and I go shopping and buy two T-shirts and a skirt. We eat soup and salad in a cafe and I get tired and go home. I watch TV and cook pancakes. They are tasty. I go to bed at 11:00 pm.Please try to keep all verb tenses the same. Here I've written everything (except the first sentence which places all in the past) in the present tense. (technically, it is the present in the past).
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The day Today was interesting. I go went to my grandma's and to help her to cook. She says me "Thanks!"thanked me. I love my grandmother. Afterwards, I with my friend Pavel and i go went to shopping and i bought two T-shortsshirts and a skirt.We eats ate soup and salad in at a cafe for lunch. I was felt tired and go to decided to go home. When i got home i watched TV and cooked pancakes. They are were tasty. I gowent to bed in at 11:00 pm.Today
Today was interesting. I went to my grandma's to help her cook . She thanked me . I love my grandmother. Afterwords,my friend Pavel and i went shopping and i bought two t-shirts and a skirt.We ate soup and salad at a cafe for lunch . I felt tired and decided to go home . When i got home i watched TV and cooked pancakes.They were tasty. I went to bed at 11.00pm.
Maybe some of the more accomplished natives here will find something wrong with my correction . I welcome the criticism :)
If not i hope this helps . Good effort :)
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Hi Sen, this is a very cute story. :)
Today
Today was interesting. I went to my grandma's and helped her to cook. She told me "Thanks!" I love my grandmother. Afterwards, I went shopping with my friend Pavel and bought two T-shirts and a skirt. We ate soup and salad in a cafe. Then I was tired and went home. I watched TV and cooked pancakes; they were tasty. I went to bed at 11:00 pm.Want to progress faster?
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