My birthday
Hello my friends! How are you? I am very happy because my birthday will be next week. I would like meet. It will be very funny. The party will be in my house. I live at Kenedy street, number 51, next to Extra supermarket. It is necessary wear a fantasy dress about Halloween. By the way, the party will be in February 15, 2016 at 0900 p.m. My birthday will have dance, music and some food and drink. Don't forget!
Let's fun!
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My birthday
Hello my friends! How are you? I am very happy because my birthday will be next week. I would like meet. It will be very funny. The party will be in my house. I live at Kenedy street, number 51, next to Extra supermarket. It is necessary wear a fantasy dress about Halloween. By the way, the party will be in February 15, 2016 at 0900 p.m. My birthday will have dance, music and some food and drink. Don't forget!Let's fun!
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My birthday
Hello my friends! How are you? I am very happy because next week, it's my birthday. I would like to meet you! We will have lots of fun. The party will be in my house. I live in Kennedy street, numer 51, next to the Extra Supermarket. The party theme is Halloween so be sure to wear a fantasy dress. By the way, the party is on February the 15th, at 9 pm. My birthday will include some dancing, nice music, food and drinks. Be there!
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Anna. Thank you very much!
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