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IELTS Writtig Task №2 Essay №4 In some countries people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest solving them? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. People want to be happy. Our happiness depends on many factors but the most important of them is them health. Health is a very sensitive thing. It may change if there are not any good conditions, or if we have not been living a healthy lifestyle. Monitoring health in some countries it is mentioned that there is correlation between people’s weight and their health. If weight is rising very fast so parameters of health are decreasing. It happens because if weight is abnormal some processes are disrupted in our bodies. The root of the problem is that the number of people who have extra weight is increasing every day. The problem of weight is real in the modern world. I think there are some reasons to it. The first reason is unhealthy food. For example fast food people can eat it very often because in everyday life people may don’t want to spend much time on cooking. Especially it is typical for countries where there are many cities. Also food companies offer many kind of food which has many sugars and fats as ingredients, and people can buy them and eat without understanding how it may have an influence on their health. I think the solution is to give more information to people about such food and about the influence to health. The second reason is very low physical activity. In some countries men and women have job in offices, they sit in front of computer, they use cars to go to work and also go home. They don’t spend calories consumed. It is typical for developed countries. . I think the solution is to make a healthy style more popular and appealing in the media Summing up in some countries there are conditions for good life like various food and public transports and road systems for cars and developed technology and so on. But there is another side of such life. The good conditions make people lazy in their everyday lives. Also they don’t pay attention much to their health. They can eat bad food, they couldn’t do any physical exercises. Each individual is responsible for their health and only they can make the situation better. And society should take some effort to make people do it.

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IELTS Writtig Task №2 Essay №4

In some countries people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest solving them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People want to be happy. Our happiness depends on many factors but the most important of them is them health. Health is a very sensitive thing. It may change if there are not any good conditions, or if we have not been living with a healthy lifestyle. Monitoring health in some countries, it is mentioned  concluded that there is correlation between people’s weight and their health. If weight is rising very fast so parameters of then health conditions are decreasing. It happens because if weight is abnormal some processes are disrupted in our bodies. The root of the problem is that the number of people who have extra weight is increasing every day. The problem of weight obesity is real in the modern world. I think there are some reasons to it.

The first reason is unhealthy food. For example fast food. Ppeople can eat it very often because in everyday life people may don’t not want to spend much time on cooking. Especially it is typical for countries where there are many cities. Also food companies offer many kind of food which has many sugars and fats as ingredients, and people can buy them and eat without understanding how it may have an influence on their health. I think the solution is to give more information to people about such food and about the influence to health.

The second reason is very low physical activity. In some countries men and women have job in offices, they sit in front of computers, they use cars to go to work and also go home. They don’t spend calories consumed. It is typical for developed countries. . I think the solution is to make a healthy life style more popular and appealing in the media

Summing up In summary, in some countries there are conditions for good life like various food and public transports transportation and road systems for cars and developed technology like computers and so on. But there is another side of such life. The good conditions make people lazy in their everyday lives. Also they don’t pay attention much to their health. They can eat bad food, they couldn’t do any physical exercises. Each individual is responsible for their health and only they can make the situation better. And society should take some effort to make people do it.

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