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Carnival Time Carnival is colour, music, dance, original costumes, funny parades and above all, cheerful atmosphere in the streets. Certainly, this celebration breaks routine every february since thousands of years. It is said that it was popularizated by romans and then was espraid of the rest of the Europe and America taking some peculiarities according to the place. What I like most is the creativity displayed in many fancy dress. In addition, I admire the desing and beauty of many masques used for cover the face. In fact, some of them are truly pieces of art. However, I might feel a bit uncomfortable in a party with people using masques. Although the masques were used in many cultures for different purpose such as in the theatre, for dance, religious ceremonies etc, the inexpressive and unkown face creates distrust, some mistery and inhibition. On the whole, the carnival will be alive for many time. These days, schools has an active participation on it and even there are more business around this show. Happy carnival!

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Carnival Time

Carnival is brings colour, music, dance, original costumes, funny parades and above all, a cheerful atmosphere in to the streets. Certainly, this celebration is a breaks from routine and has been held every February since for thousands of years.

It is said that it was initially popularizated by the Romans and then was espraid of spread to the rest of the Europe and the Americas taking with it some unique peculiarities according to the place.

What I like most is the creativity displayed in the many/numerous fancy dresses. In addition, I admire the design and beauty of many the different masques masks used for to cover the face. In fact, some of them are truly pieces of art. However, I might feel a bit uncomfortable in a party with people wearing them. using masques. Although the masques Masks were used in many cultures for different purposes such as in the theatre, for dances, religious ceremonies etc.  The inexpressive and unknown face that they creates can result in distrust, some mystery and inhibition.

On the whole, the Carnival will continue to live on for a long time. be alive for many time. These days, schools has an and many businesses actively participate in it. and even there are more business around this show. Happy Carnival!

Well done Mila!  It is nice to see you writing again in English.  Enjoy Carnival this year!

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Carnival Time

Carnival is a time of colour, music, dance, original costumes, funny parades and above all, cheerful atmosphere in the streets. Certainly, this celebration breaks has broken the daily routine every February since for thousands of years.

It is said that it was popularizated by Romans and then was espraid spread to of the rest of the Europe and America, taking on some peculiarities according to the in each place.

What I like most is the creativity displayed in many fancy dress so many costumes. In addition, I admire the desing? and beauty of many masques used for cover the face. In fact, some of them are truly pieces of art. However, I might feel a bit uncomfortable in a party with people using masques. Although the masques were used in many cultures for different purpose such as in the theatre, for dance, religious ceremonies etc, the inexpressive and unkown face creates distrust, some mystery and inhibition.

On the whole, the Carnival will be alive for many a long time. These days, many schools has an active participation on actively participate in it and even there are even more businesses around this show that do. Happy Carnival!

 

I'm jealous!  I wish Carnival had spread to my part of the Americas!  Glad you enjoyed, Mila!

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Carnival Time

Carnival is colour, music, dance, original costumes, funny parades and above all, a cheerful atmosphere in the streets. Certainly, this celebration has broken the routine of every February for thousands of years.

It is said that it was popularized by the Romans and then was spread of the rest of Europe and America taking some peculiarities according to the place.

What I like most is the creativity displayed in many fancy dresses. In addition, I admire the (desing?) and beauty of the many masks to cover the face. In fact, some of them are truly pieces of art. However, I might feel a bit uncomfortable in a party with people using masks. Although the masks were used in many cultures for different purposes such as theatre, dance, religious ceremonies etc, the inexpressive and unknown face creates distrust, some mystery and inhibition.

On the whole, the carnival will be alive for many more years to come. These days schools have an active participation in it and even there are more businesses around this show. Happy carnival!

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