past tense
In the middle school. I was have a cat. I was really love him. Because the cat is male cat. But, i couldn't keep him up because the cat always threw away his dirt to anyplace in the house. So, in the end. I have to free him up from my house.
this is just short story from mystory and if there is a false words i hope there is somebody out there correct it.
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In the middle school, I was havehad a cat. I was really loved him. Because the cat is male cat. But, I couldn't keep him up because the cat always threw away his dirt to anyplace in the house. So, in the end, I haved to free him up from my house.
This is just a short story of myself(/from my story) and if there is aany false words, I hope there is somebody out there to correct it.
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Hi rikidesmawan, Great Job.
You use phases like "keep up" etc. very well. Please take care not to repeat verbs like "was have", "was love". Because "have" or "love" is verb itself, any other verb is not needed.
Keep on your practice!
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