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my family it's my first time that i write notebook. i have a big family and i have 1 brother and 1 sister and my mother has11 brothers inlude the man and the woman and i didn't know exactly sum of them. my father has many brothers and the worst i didnt know exactly sum of them. i am working now and also don't really speak english so if there is someone out there could correction my notebook. i am very appreciation.

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Tip: When beginning a new sentence capitalize the first letter :) Also, capitalize the letter "I" at all times. 

Correction:

My family.

This is my first time writing in my notebook.
I have a big family. In my family I have, one brother, one sister, my mother, and father. My mother has 11 siblings. My father has many brothers, but I do not know the exact amount. I am currently working as I type. English is not my native language, so if there is someone out there who could correct my entry I would highly appreciate it.


Keep up the great work! :)


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