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Writing about jogging and improving writing skills. It is my second notebook entry, I like to read the corrections of other notebook entries because I think it would help me to improve my writing skills, and it's very funny to read them. So I would like to write something to check it. This week I began my training, I love jog, but I have a month without jog because I was sick as many as four weeks ago, now I am not able to jog more than 30 minutes. I have 8 months to be able to jog 21 km in at least 1:30 minutes because I want to participate in Queretaro's marathon, it is a very popular competition in México. I am not a professional runner, but I like to do my best in everything. I've been runner for a year, the longest distance that I've crossed was 15 km through two craters in Valle de Santiago, a town in Mexico. My best time was in 21K OXXO’s competition where I ran 10 km in 43 minutes. The best way to be faster is jogging up in a pending, when I began to jog I spent an hour to complete 8 km, after I training I would able to jog the same distance in at least 40 minutes.

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Writing about jogging and improving writing skills.

It is my second notebook entry, I like to read the corrections of other notebook entries because I think it would will help me to improve my writing skills, and it's very funny to read them. So I would like to write something to check it.
This week I began my training, I love to jog, but I have it's been a month without jog since I've jogged because I was sick as many as about (sounds more natural) four weeks ago, now I am not able to jog for more than 30 minutes.
I have 8 months to be able to jog 21 km in at least 1:30 minutes because I want to participate in Queretaro's marathon, it is a very popular competition in México.
I am not a professional runner, but I like to do my best in everything.
I've been runner for a year, the longest distance that I've crossed was 15 km through two craters in Valle de Santiago, a town in Mexico. My best time was in 21K OXXO’s competition where I ran 10 km in 43 minutes.
The best way to be faster is jogging up in a pending (I think you mean "an incline"?), when I began to jog I spent took an hour to complete 8 km, after I my training I would was able to jog the same distance in at least ("at least 40 minutes" means 40 minutes or more, which I don't think it what you mean.  Maybe "less than 40 minutes"?  "About" is always a great word, too!) 40 minutes.

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