Chinese New Year is comming~ Yeah!
I miss Shanghai, miss my family and friends, miss everything in Shanghai.
I wish I can go back to home and celebrate Chinese New Year with them.
I don't wanna work during the new year, because that is too sad....
.....
sigh~
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Chinese New Year is comming~ Yeah!
I miss Shanghai, I miss my family and friends, I miss everything in Shanghai.I wish I can could go back to home and celebrate Chinese New Year with them.
I don't wanna want to work during the New Year, because that is too sad....
.....
sigh~
Good work. I only changed 'wanna' as I think it's better just to use in spoken English, rather than written English. But that may just be my personal preference. I hope you are not too homesick over the Chinese New Year period. It must be hard to be away at such an important time of the year.
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Chinese New Year is comming~ Yeah!
I miss Shanghai miss and my family and friends. I miss everything in about Shanghai.I wish I can could go back to home and celebrate Chinese New Year with them.
I don't wanna work during the new year, because that is too sad....
(You could also say instead: "because that makes me too sad...")
.....
sigh~
Hope you don't feel too down and are able to talk to them on the special day! :)
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