My birthday was ruined!
Yesterday was my 24th birthday. And I enjoyed it alone. I have no friends, family and relatives to celebrate with.
It seems like I only live on my own, no one can lead a role in my miserable life.
As I am writing this entry, I am sitting alone under the moonlight. I wonder how many people who are living their life like me?
I know life is precious to begin with, but I can't see the wonderful world yet since I was born into this world.
Maybe I am cursed to live. I'd rather die!
I wish I could die peacefully and no pains at all.
No one will concern about me.
I just had enough of my bullshit life and I can't fix it no matter what!!
If only I won't wake up tomorrow.
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My birthday was ruined!
Yesterday was my 24th birthday and I celebrated it alone. I had no friends, family or relatives to celebrate with.It seems like I live all on my own; no one wants to be part of my miserable life.
As I am writing this entry, I am sitting alone under the moonlight. I wonder how many people are living their life like me?
I know life is precious to begin with, but I haven't seen how wonderful it can be thought my years on this planet.
Maybe I am cursed to live. I'd rather die!
I wish I could die peacefully and painlessly.
No one cares about me.
I've just had enough of my bullshit life and I can't seem to fix it no matter what!!
If only I wouldn't wake up tomorrow.
First of all, pretty well written text. The subject matter is......worrisome. I hope you are ok and this is just a practice text!
Remember, life is what you make it. You are young and beautiful and your english is pretty great! Keep up the good work and focus your negativity into something positive! Good luck! :)
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My birthday was ruined!
Yesterday was my 24th birthday. And I enjoyed it alone. IIt seems like I
As I am writing this entry, I am sitting alone under the moonlight. I wonder how many people who are living their life like me?
I know life is precious to begin with, but I
Maybe I am cursed
I wish I could die peacefully and experience no pain
No one will be concerned about me.
I have just had enough of my bullshit life and I can't fix it no matter what!!
If only I won't wake up tomorrow.
I have been in a similar situation before. It takes it to ask for help and to reach out to professionals who can give you solid and good advice. It works. Trust me. I have been there, done that and got the T-shirt (as we say in English).
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Thank you so much for all of you for your advice and concerns.
Your words are touched!!
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I, too, have been through this experience. Unlike Simon [below], I did not 'reach out to professionals', though you should ask for help if it is available.
Some people, and you are one of them, find happiness elusive. There's nothing wrong with this; it seems to afflict intelligent people with inquiring minds. You may also have medical or health problems. We just have to learn to live with these.
As you say, life is precious, and there are wonders in the world, if we can find them. We owe it to those who brought us in to the world, and those who may care about us, even if we are unaware of it, and finally to ourselves, not to give up on the search for those wonders. You're wrong to say that you 'can't fix it, no matter what', but it could take time, effort, and patience. Those of us who have been in our lives where you are now would all want to join me in wishing you the best of luck.
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No-no-no, don't even think like that! You're smart, beautiful, nice person and you are precious! You have yourself and no matter what, you are the generator of your mood, you are the sun, moon and universe! You are independent of the good or bad opinions of the others. If something is going wrong, whatever, you can handle it! Make today better than yesterday!
And HAPPY BIRTHDAY, sweetheart!!!
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