Student life*1(/Life student)

Student life(/Life student) – I have graduated from university
I was born in a rural area and I have been(/stayed) away from my home for the duration of study. That’s the reason I have a bit of trouble for paying in my university, there are many things I have to pay for it such as tuition fee, loans, and accommodation fee, etc.. Off course I chose the hall of residence for staying which helped me to save a little money, but I had a great deal of time with all my friends, besides I found a part-time job in a restaurant when I just was just*2 a freshman.*3 But if I could comego back to that time, I would want to join English club and Volunteer club, or I should find the part-time job which related to my subject rather than working in a restaurant, it would be a good opportunity for me. So if you are student now, you should do that (could improve yourself)?, then you’ll become more flexible and improve your skills.

P/s: I’m missing my friends theywho always makemade (constant) lively noises.
Thank for the correction!

aaa: correction, aaa: suggestion, aaa(/bbb): aaa is better, aaa: deleted

*1 This order is more natural.

*2 Adverb is usually put before general verbs and after substantive and auxiliary verbs.

*3 It's better to split the sentence here, because the tense changes here.

Hello Mai, great job.

Wish you a happy Lunar New Year!