my "Kimono" lessons
Good evening. It is 11p.m. in Japan.
Every Thursday, I have "Kimono" lessons.
"Kimono" is Japanese traditional dress.
In old years, most of Japanese people wore "Kimono", but now many Japanese don't wear "Kimono".
To put on "Kimono" is very difficult, so a lot of Japanese is forgetting how to put on it.
But, I want remembering Japanese culture, so I have lessons about "Kimono".
thank you for reading♡
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My "Kimono" lessons
Good evening. It is 11p.m. in Japan.Every Thursday, I have "Kimono" lessons, the "Kimono" is traditional Japanese dress. In older times, most Japanese people wore a "Kimono", but now many Japanese don't wear a "Kimono".
To put on a "Kimono" is very difficult, so a lot of Japanese forget how to put it on. But, I want to remember Japanese culture, so I have lessons about the "Kimono".
Thank you for reading♡
Hello Chiho,
This is a really nice text about the kimono, you don't need to put this word in quote marks because I think it is well known throughout the world now. I know some of my Japanese students have brought kimonos to school in England and they look amazing!
Try to put your sentences together to make paragraphs like I did. It makes the writing more natural. In English we use a new paragraph for each new main point.
Best wishes
Bob
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