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4th excise from Job Liang(skype ID) two working days later, I will enter the holidays of Chinese Festival, so exciting, I will go to my home town, the middle mainland of China, stay with my parents and my sister, elder brother. I am the third boy in my family, also is the last one. we have our children and my sister's son married. my son is only ten years old. now I am puzzled what gifts should bring to them. the South's sausage is delicious, it is little sweet. I like Meat clip buns of my town more. take some dress for my parents or some snacks to my sister and her son, or any thing. whatever, we are all at home is the best gift for my parents and our family. have a nice days....

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4th excise from Job Liang(skype ID)

two working days later, Two days from now, I will enter start the my holidays of  for Chinese Festival (we call it "Chinese New Year" or "Lunar New Year").  It's so exciting. I will go to my home town  hometown, in the middle mainland of China, and stay with my parents, and my sister, and my elder brother. I am the third boy in my family, and also is the last one youngest.  We have our children, and my sister's son nephew is married. My son is only ten years old. now I am puzzled I am trying to decide (this sounds more natural) what gifts I should bring to them. The South's sausage is delicious, it is a little sweet. I like the meat clip buns of from my town more. I might take some dress clothing for my parents, or some snacks to my sister and her son, or any thing. whatever, It doesn't matter, we are all at home, and that is the best gift for my parents and our family. Have a nice days day....


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