Love Story
- I'll tell you an amazing story...
...Once upon, there are two people, one who is "I Love You", the other is "You Don't Love Me". But one day, "You Don't Love Me" die, you tell me who alive?
- What*? Of course everyone knows it. If I say the answer is "I love you", you would say: "You are a secret crush on him, right?"
- Not that....Just the game, come on!
- Uhm, I love you!
- Hey, I love you too! :">
- ...
- So, I'll tell you another story...
...Once upon, there are two people, one who is "You Love me", the other is "I Don't Love You". But one day, "You Love Me" die, you tell me who alive?
-I Don't Love You !
-But... I still love you!
- (^_^)
-Not kidding, I really love you <3
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Love Story
- I'll tell you an amazing story......Once upon a time, there are were two people, one whose name was is "I Love You", the other's name was is "You Don't Love Me". But one day, "You Don't Love Me" died, you tell me who is still alive?
- What*? Of course everyone knows it that if I say the answer is "I love you", you will say that I have a are a secret crush on him you. Right?"
- Not that.... NO! This is just the a game, come on!
- Uhm, I love you!
- Hey, I love you too! :">
- ...
- So, I'll tell you another story...
...Once upon a time, there were are two people, one whose name was is "You Love me", the other's name was is "I Don't Love You". But one day, "You Love Me" died, you tell me who is still alive?
-I Don't Love You !
-But... I still love you!
- (^_^)
-Not kidding, I really love you <3
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What is wrong with this text? Please fix it for me. Thanks you <3
AWWWW MUI are you trying to get into someone's pants? that's soooo cute!!!! Hope it works out :)...
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thanks you :D
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I understand what you're trying to get at generally... But do you mean one person has a crush on someone else? And is this a dialogue?
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