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I like the countryside <3 When I was a kid, my father used to go with us to the countryside. We met there my uncles, ants, cousins and grandparents. I enjoyed playing with my girls cousins: we picked off flowers, took care of chicken and cows, or just ran arround. My brother and boys cousins enjoyed making us afraid doing tricks. When I remember those days I feel really happy. I haven't slept at the trip's nights, I felt scared just thinking I could mess the trip. Those were wonderful days.

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When I was a kid, my father used to take us to the countryside. We met  my uncles, aunts, cousins and grandparents there. I enjoyed playing with my female cousins. We picked flowers, took care of chickens, cows, or just ran around. My brother and boys cousins enjoyed making us afraid doing tricks. When I remember those days I feel really happy. Those were wonderful days.

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I haven't slept at the trip's nights, I felt scared just thinking I could mess the trip.

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I like the countryside <3

When I was a kid, my father used to go with us to the countryside. There we met there my uncles, aunts, cousins and grandparents. I enjoyed playing with my girl (no "s" on girls) cousins: we picked off flowers, took care of chickens and cows, or just ran around. My brother and boy (no "s") cousins enjoyed making us afraid by playing tricks. When I remember those days I feel really happy. I didn't sleep during the nights on the trip's nights, I felt scared just thinking I could miss the trip. Those were wonderful days.


This is nice.

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I like the countryside <3

When I was a kid, my father used to go with us to the countryside. We met there my uncles, ants aunts (ants are bugs), cousins and grandparents. I enjoyed playing with my girl cousins: we picked off flowers, took care of chickens and cows, or just ran around. My brother and boy cousins enjoyed making us afraid by playing tricks. When I remember those days I feel really happy. I didn't sleep during the trip because I felt scared just thinking I could miss the trip. Those were wonderful days.

Changed the sentence about sleeping to put it in past tense so it would match the rest of the paragraph.

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