My Master's Degree

Hello, I'm Salma from Egypt.

I'm a veterinarian. When I received my master's degree I tried to write an essay but I had a problem with writing.  It was so difficult. Also, when I did my presentation I had a problem with speaking. Please help me to improve my work to be the best .
Thanks for all your help.

or Thanks to all (of you).

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My master's degree

Hello, I'm Salma from Egypt.
I'm a veterinarian. When I graduated in master's degree, I tried to write an essay but I figured I have problem to write my essay and it was so difficult. Also, when I done my presentation I understood I have problem with my speaking. please help me to improve my skills to get  better.
Thanks everybody!

My Master's Degree

Hello, I'm Salma.
I am from Egypt.
I'm a veterinarian. When I got (into?) a master's degree and tried writing (writting) essays (assey), I had (get a) problems in writing (writting ) my essay (assey ). It was so difficult. Also when I did my presentation I have problems with speech (speek). Please help (hlep) me to improve my work to be the best .
Thanks

Hi Salma,

Good try! Just make sure that you stick to the tense that you would like to use. For example, either use:

"When I did my presentation I had a problem with speech" (happened once) or  "When I do presentations I have a problem with speech"(happens regularly)

Also feel free to connect your sentences a bit more.

Here is how I would write it:

Hello, I'm Salma and I am a veterinarian from Egypt. I found essay writing difficult when I did my master's degree. Also, when I did presentations I had problems with my speech. Please help me to improve my work to be the best.

Thanks.

Notice that in each sentence I stick to the same tense

I hope this helps and good luck in learning!

Scott

My master

Hello, i'm I'm (always capitalize I) salma. Salma (capitalize names of people)
I am from egypt . Egypt (capitalize names of places)
I'm a veterinarian . When i I got amaster  a master (remember a space between a and the next word) and tried to writting write an assey essay , i I (remember to always capitalize I when referring to yourself)  had get aproblem a problem in writting writing my assey essay. It was so dificult difficult. also Also (remember to capitalize the fist word of a sentence) when i I did my presentation i I have had (it is past tense of have) aproblem a problem with speek speaking. please Please hlep help me to improve my work to be the best .
Thanks for all