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I think this winter is warm in Japan It's winter now. I think It's warm this year in Japan because I don't use oil heater in this winter's nights. When it was about this time last year, I had already used the heater. By the way, I think that it is the best as the bedroom of the heater but it cost a lot in electricity.

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I think this winter is warm in Japan

It's winter now. I think It's warmer this year in Japan because I 'm not using the oil heater in during these winter nights. When it was By about this time last year, I had already used the heater. By the way, I think that it is the better this way as the bedroom of the heater but it costs a lot in electricity to heat the bedroom.
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I think this year's winter is a warm one for in Japan

It's winter now. I think it's Japan's warmer this year in Japan because I'm not don't using the oil heater in this winter's at nights. When it was About this time last year, I was had already using the heater. By the way, I think this is for the that it is the best as heating the bedroom of the heater but it cost a lot in electricity.
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I think this winter is warm in Japan. GOOD JOB!!!

It's winter now. GOOD JOB!!!


I think It's warm this year in Japan because I don't use oil heater in this winter's nights. ---this sentence is wrong. what you are saying is that Japan is warm because you are not using oil heater.  

I think you meant this: This year, I think it's warm in Japan, because I didn't need to use oil heater during the winter nights. 


When it was about this time last year, I had already used the heater. ---This sentence is grammatically correct!!!!

You can say it this way as well:  During this time last year, I had already used my heater.


By the way, I think that it is the best as the bedroom of the heater but it cost a lot in electricity. --- You are saying that the heater had a bedroom and the bedroom costs a lot in electricity.  

I think you meant to say this: By the way, this is a good thing because heating the bedroom (wastes a lot of electricity) OR (costs a lot money). 


Don't get discouraged! Keep on working hard!!!!






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Stay warm :)

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