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The 2nd of February 2016 The 2nd of February 2016 Today, the weather is beautiful. The sun woke up at 5:30 and is still shining without any clouds. There is a little bit of wind, the temperature is 30 degree celsius. I would like to take a day off and have a trip on a boat. It is predicted strong rain for tomorrow, at least the the temperature will be cooler.

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The 2nd of February 2016 February (the) 2nd

Today, the weather is beautiful. = (The weather was beautiful today.)

The sun woke up at 5:30 and is still shining without any clouds. = (The sun came up/rose at 5:30 and it's still shining.)

Although there is a little bit of wind, the temperature is 30 degrees Celsius. = (Although it was a bit windy it wasn't too cold. Although it was a bit windy it was only 30 degrees Celsius.) [I think the first one is better.]

I would like to take a day off and take have a trip on a boat. = (I would like to have a day off [or vacation] and go on a boat.)

It's predicted that there'll be strong rain for tomorrow, at least and the temperature will be cooler. = (Tomorrow it's supposed to rain hard and it's supposed to be colder.)


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---- - more casual/common way to say it

       - wrong/take out


The only thing I would say to work on is your tense. Some parts were present and others past. I switched it more to past tense. I hope you keep studying English ^^

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The 2nd of February 2016

The 2nd of February 2016
Today, the weather is beautiful. The sun woke up (this sounds ok, but normally we say "the sun rose...") at 5:30 and is still shining without any clouds. There is a little bit of wind, and the temperature is 30 degrees Celsius. I would like to take a day off and have a trip on a boat.
It is predicted strong rain for tomorrow Strong rain is predicted for tomorrow. At least the the temperature will be cooler.
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"The sun woke up" is very poetic, but we would not use it in normal conversation. When referring to the sun, we use the verb "to rise". The sun will rise tomorrow, just as it rose today. p.s. 30 degrees celsius in February? I'm jealous!

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