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An intuition
Everyone have has heard about an intuition and most of us think that only women have an intuition. Maybe this it is right or maybe not? One thing is certain: women have this the 6th sense. I don't know why and how but there are moments that I know that something will happen. I wake up in the morning and I know that on this day something will happen. But mothers have the most stronger intuition have mothers. A mother feels and she knows when something bad might/could/will happen with her baby. On the other hand there can exist a stronger intuition than a mather's intuiton. Between twins there is so such a strong relation. Psychologists still try to understand relation which is between twins. I have watched movies where scientists try tries to understanding this relation.But I can't agree that only women have an intuition. Also men have this sense but most of them don't think about it. In the book "Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus" we can read that men are more rational than women. And maybe the 6th sense for them is not an intuition but an instinct?
Great! Some explanation...
[1] Everyone in english is singular (wiem, wiem!), e.g. Everyone *is* here, everyone has an appointment.
[2] intution = noun but is like an emotion. Emotions/feelings don't usually need an object (a / the).
[3] maybe *this* is right - because we have discussed it already, the definite article/pronoun... so "the idea"/ or "this"
[4] "on this day" is better than "this day". Moving it to the end would sound even more natural. "something will happen on this day"
[5] "the strongest intuition" would be a bit better than "the most strong intuition"
[6] "such a ..." = an example of what was just describes. e.g. some languages are very complex for English people. Polish is such a language.
[7] try + verb is always "try to do something"
These are only minor points though, in general this is very good English.
An Intuition
Everyone has heard about an intuition and most of us think that only women have them. Maybe it is right or maybe not. One thing is certain; women have this the 6th sense. I don't know why and how but there are moments that I know that something will happen. I wake up in the morning and I know that this day something will happen. But mothers have very strong intuitions. A mother feels and she knows when something bad will happen with her baby. On the other hand, there is a stronger intuition than a mother's. Between twins there is such a strong relation*. Psychologists still try understand the relation between twins. I have watched movies where scientists try to understand this relation.But I can't agree that only women have an intuition. Also men have this sense but most of them don't think about it. In the book "Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus" we read that men are more rational than women. And maybe the 6th sense for them is not an intuition but an instinct?
*what about twins; one of whom is a mother, and the other is not?
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