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On Sunday, June 28th, I woke up around  6:45. I had muesli, yogurt, and bread for breakfast. The weather was warm and sunny as we continued our trip to Tjejkien, where we ate fries and sampled their national drink, Becherovka (a type of alcohol (I would be more specific here) served cold, and often with tonic water). We then continued our journey to Prague, the capital of the Czech Republic, where we visited a sunny old town. It seemed a little extravagant(extravagant means in this context really nice or overly decorated) before we arrived to the more modern part of the city. We saw an opera building, a fantastic football game, and even bought some cards to take home.
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On Monday, June 29th, we woke up around 7:00, and had breakfast at 07:15. At about 8:45 we visited the cultural towers of Adam and Eve, as well as a memorial in the Jewish quarter. In the memorial, there were also mentions of the representatives(maybe they meant martyrs but, I'm not sure) for (not sure what you mean by representatives – people aren’t usually representatives if they are dead) the Jewish community that were killed by the invading Nazis in prelude to the Holocaust. Where millions of the Jewish community suffered genocidal attacks. Just before entering the city, a clock on the church chimed three times. We also visited the Grand Hotel and The Europa National Museum. When it came time to eat again, we had meat soup for a starter, a main course of fried potatoes and steak with salad(you don't have to put starter or main course. You can list the foods you ate. Either way is fine though). Afterwards we went down to the harbor leading to a bridge that circled back to the hotel. There we listened to U21 players while we sat in a diner eating pie with a Coke to drink. The little cafe was near the clock tower that we heard ring earlier.




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Tuesday was our last day. We woke up at 7:00 and ate breakfast at 8:45. We arrived at Saint Mania which had lookout towers, palaces, Cathedrals, and Edward Benez Sankt(I've never heard of that) (Maybe explain what this is). When the group(Are you talking about your family or friends as the group?) (what group?), along with my mother and father, we sat on a bridge eating meat and potato salad with some ice cream. Afterwards we went to another hotel and drank Coke at a cafe restaurant while writing postcards. Before returning home we bought some delicious buns to conclude our 5-day vacation!


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