1st Entry: Introducing me
Hello everyone, my name is Miguel, I'm 15 years old and I'm from Venezuela, so my native language is Spanish. I'm a languages ethusiast and my goal is learn around 12 languages. I'm a little obsessive when I'm learning a language, and sometimes it's not the correct way... Well, it's never the correct way. Now, I'm learning Catalan, French, Chinese and Japanese, but I'd like to learn Italian, Portuguese, Russian, Greek, Corean and German too. Maybe it looks like a lot but... Well, it's a lot, but it doesn't matter to me, because I love it :D
Me encantan los idiomas e italki es la mejor herramienta que he encontrado ^-^ I love to chat with new people who have different culture and languages, I think it's so exciting to learn about this.
What do you think about this? Do you love the languages too? ^-^
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1st Entry: Introducing Myself
Hello everyone, my name is Miguel I am 15 years old and I'm from Venezuela. My native language is Spanish I am a languages ethusiast enthusiast and my goal is to learn around 12 languages. I'm a little obsessive when I am learning a new language and sometimes it's not the correct best way... Well, it's never the correct best way. Now I'm learning Catalan, French, Chinese and Japanese but I'd like to learn Italian, Portuguese, Russian, Greek, Korean and German too. Maybe it looks like a lot but... Well, it's a lot, but it doesn't matter to me because I love it :DMe encantan los idiomas e italki es la mejor herramienta que he encontrado ^-^ I love to chat with new people who have different culture and languages, I think it's so exciting to learn about this.
What do you think about this? Do you love the learning languages too? ^-^
Tip:
- Use less commas ,
We use them to list things, like you did in one example and for a pause (to breath) in a sentence.
Don't use a comma next to And, But, However etc because these are linking/connecting words.
- Use less abbreviated words e.g. I'm, you've etc
It's great you know them but you don't have to use them all the time.
Great Job keep on studying, I hope my corrections help.
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1st Entry: Introducing me
Hello, everyone. My name is Miguel. I'm 15 years old and I'm from Venezuela, so my native language is Spanish. I'm a language enthusiast and my goal is learn around 12 languages. I'm a little obsessive when I'm learning a language, and sometimes it's not the correct way... Well, it's never the correct way. Now, I'm learning Catalan, French, Chinese and Japanese, but I'd like to learn Italian, Portuguese, Russian, Greek, Korean, and German, too. Maybe it looks like a lot, but... Well, it's a lot, but it doesn't matter to me, because I love it :DMe encantan los idiomas e italki es la mejor herramienta que he encontrado ^-^ I love to chat with new people who have different culture and languages, I think it's so exciting to learn about this.
What do you think about this? Do you love the languages too? ^-^
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I love learning new languages too and sometimes I'm getting a bit obsessive. We are the same lol
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