IELTS Writing Task 1: Radio and Television Audiences This is an essay for IELTS exam writing task 1. I hope someone could give me some advice on my work. Your help is greatly appreciated!!!!! -------- The graph gives information about radio and television audiences in the UK during a day in 1992. It is noticeable that television was more popular than radio in the evening while radio was more popular in the morning. In general, more people watched television than listening to radio, since the percentage of audience that television received were(was?) nearly twice the figure for radio. To be more specific, the percentage of people listening to radio reached a peak at 8 am when (where?) almost 30 % of British turned on their radio, in the meantime, television only had less than 10 % of audience. In contrast to radio, more people liked to watch television in the evening, especially at 8 pm when nearly 45 % of British enjoyed various television shows, whereas only close to 7 % of people listened to radio. Besides 8 in the morning and in the evening when (where?) radio and TV received the most audience respectively, we can also observe another peak at 2 pm when(where?) around 15 % of audience spent their time on both media. (179 words) Questions: 1. Should I write 'was' or 'were'? since I am not sure 'the percentage of audience' is plural or singular ... 2. Can I replace 'when' with 'where' as I noted them in the paragraphs? and if yes, which one is better? Thank you in advance for your help! :)