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The Stranger. Part 3. "Another island" Our brave traveler is in unknown room. Now he start looking around. He is seeing bow and arrows lying on the floor near of him. At that moment several uncensored expressions flying in his mind... Let him to tell this story... Damian, please speak. "After the first bang I get to the island. Second bang threw me here. I have to understand how it work..." I got up from the bed and came to the door. It was very strange so I decided to open the door very slowly listening sounds beyond the door. "What is it? Tavern! I'm in the medievil tavern!" Innkeeper noticed me "Good morning, sir! You already woke up." "Yeah! Where am I" "You are in my tavern" I wanted to begin swearing but I didn't do it. "What is a name of the settle?" "Do you realy don't remember anything? Bridgetown, This is Bridgetown, sir! I have a message for you. One stranger gave it me early in the morning. Please, take this sheet" I began reading the letter: "Don't do stupid things. At the sunset you will go to the lighthouse and wait there. Remember, we are watching for you..."

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The Stranger. Part 3. "Another island"

Our brave traveler is in unknown room. Now he startS looking around. He  SEES  a bow and arrows lying on the floor next to him. At that moment several uncensored expressions flying in his mind... Let him  tell us this story... Damian, please speak.
"After the first bang I got to the island. Second bang threw me here. I have to understand how it worked..."
I got up from the bed and came to the door. It was very strange so I decided to open the door very slowly listening sounds behind the door.
"What is it? Tavern! I'm in a medieval tavern!"
Innkeeper took notice of me
"Good morning, sir! You already woke up."
"Yeah! Where am I"
"You are in my tavern"
I wanted to start swearing but I didn't do it.
"What is the name of the settlement?"
"Do you really don't remember anything? Bridgetown, This is Bridgetown, sir! I have a message for you. One stranger gave it TO me early in the morning. Please, take this sheet"
I began reading the letter:
"Don't do stupid things. At the sunset you will go to the lighthouse and wait there. Remember, we are watching for you..."
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She is saying that you aren't supposed to do that, which is correct.
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I don't understand this sentense
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Please, read carecully this text. I knowingly used different tenses
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Just a tip, when using English make sure all your verbs are the same tense. When telling a story you want to use past progressive tense. He started looking around... He saw(was staring at) a bow and arrow...expressions came flying out of his mind.

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