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Eiffel Tower. Hi! I need somebody to help me with my english please. >.< The Eiffel Tower: Eiffel Tower is one of the important monuments of the history. The towering construction was built in 1889 in Paris by Gustave Eiffel. At first, people didn't like the iron tower because they thought it was hideous. But now, it's considered a modern, elegant construction. The height of the tower is 300 m. It has a lot of floors. If you want go up it, you can use the stairs, but there are elevators also. Is an unique experience be the last floor because you will be able to see the spectacular view of the city.

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Eiffel Tower.

Hi! I need somebody to help me with my English please. >.<

The Eiffel Tower:

Eiffel Tower is one of the important monuments in history. The towering construction was built in 1889 in Paris by Gustave Eiffel.
At first, people didn't like the iron tower because they thought it was hideous. But now, it's considered a modern, elegant construction.
The height of the tower is 300 m. It has a lot of floors. If you want go up it, you can use the stairs, but there are also elevators .
It is a unique experience because from  the top floor you will be able to see a spectacular view of the city.


Hello Alguien,

Interesting text about the Eiffel Tower, just a few small corrections. In the last line you dropped the 'it' which is quite common with Spanish speakers. With 'an' you need to be careful when using it with 'u' - if the word begins with a true 'u' sound like uncle then you should use 'an' but if it is a word like uniform or unique, the first sound is a 'j' sound so you should use 'a'.


Hope this helps


Bob

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Eiffel Tower.

Hi! I need somebody to help me with my english please. >.<

The Eiffel Tower:

Eiffel Tower is one of the important monuments in history. The towering construction was built in 1889 in Paris by Gustave Eiffel.
At first, people didn't like the iron tower because they thought it was hideous. But now, it's considered a modern, elegant construction.
The height of the tower is 300 m. It has a lot of floors. If you want go up it, you can use the stairs, but there are elevators as well.
It is an unique experience to be on the top floor because you will be able to see the most spectacular view of the city.

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