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Some People Like To Do Only What They Already Do Well. Other....(TOEFL) I know a lot of people in my hometown, my friends and others who still live there and do the same things during the years. I have to say that I left my home town, actually very small and very boring place, when I was sixteen years old. Those my friends who stayed there are still living there. They decided that it is better to do things that they do well. As you have already understood, my choice is totally different. I like risk, new experience and earn a lot of money. I will try to describe my opinion here. First of all, I think do the same things all along is boring. Honestly, I cannot sit on one place long time, and I remember how difficult it was in my childhood. Therefore, I like to change my environment, my friends, my work, etc. I believe there is no place for boredom in my life. Secondly, I appreciate people who all the time learn new knowledge and gain new experience. All my life I try to be similar like they. New experience and knowledge enrich my life. Like illustration of my desire to try different things, I can provide the list of my professions. I used to be an actor, a manager, a street musician, a singer and dancer in restaurant, a radio DJ, a screenwriter, a film director. This is only short list. Finally, since my childhood I wanted to earn a lot of money. So, I tried to find my self and figure out in what field I can be successful. What major can bring me fame and money? Eventually, I have found this occupation. This is a film directing and producing. However, this is a topic for next essay and I will not to pay your attention on this. In conclusion, I have to say, that in my opinion and due to my own experience, taking a risk is much more interesting than focusing on one thing from childhood to the end of life.

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Some People Like To Do Only What They Already Do Well. Other....(TOEFL)

I know a lot of people in my hometown, my friends and others who still live there and do the same things during the years. I have to say that I left my home town, which is actually a very small and very boring place, when I was sixteen years old. Those of my friends who stayed there are still living there. They decided that it is better to do things that they do well. As you have already understood, my choice is totally different. I like risks, new experiences and earning a lot of money. I will try to describe my opinion here.
First of all, I think doing the same things all along is boring. Honestly, I cannot sit on in one place for long time, and I remember how difficult it was in my childhood. Therefore, I like to change my environment, my friends, my work, etc. I believe there is no place for boredom in my life.
Secondly, I appreciate people who all the time learn new knowledge and gain new experiences. All my life I try to be similar like they to them. New experiences and knowledge enrich my life. Like an illustration of my desire to try different things, I can provide the list of my professions. I used to be an actor, a manager, a street musician, a singer and dancer in restaurant ["a restaurant" or "restaurants"], a radio DJ, a screenwriter, a film director. This is only a/the short list.
Finally, since my childhood I wanted to earn a lot of money. So, I tried to find myself and figure out in what field I can be successful. What major can bring me fame and money? Eventually, I have found this occupation. This is a film directing and producing. However, this is a topic for my next essay and I will not to pay focus your attention on this.
In conclusion, I have to say, that in my opinion and due to my own experiences, taking a risk is much more interesting than focusing on one thing from childhood to the end of life.

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