when you love someone
when i met him, I'm a 1st student at university, and he's too. suddenly, i dont know how i love him, anyway. He is not tall like everyone, and exactly he 's154cm. my family prevented me that you can choose someone better, and they dont want i met him. i'm so bored. But i'm always love him, and i decided that i have to live my way. and now, i and he are happy.we share and help everything in my life, and he's so important with me. so if you love someone, come and get it :)
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When you love someone.
When I met him, I was a 1st year student at university, and he was too. Suddenly Sometimes, I dont know how why I love him, anyway. He is not tall like everyone, and he 's only 154cm tall. My family prevented advised me that you I can could choose someone better, and they dont did not want I met him (... "did not like that I had met him" sound better). I'm so bored. But i'm always love him, and i decided that i have to live my way. and now, i and he we are happy. We share and help each other in everything in my life, and he's so important with me to me. So if you love someone, come and get it (... "go and get him/her" sounds better) :)Nice effort!
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I have soffered so much for love. Nowadays, I don't believe in Love anymore.
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