my city I live in Benidorm. It's situated on the east coast of Spain This is the city of spain with more hotels per square meter about 500 approximately. The main way of work here is related to servi

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my city I live in Benidorm. It's situated on the east coast of Spain This is the city of spain with more hotels per square meter about 500 approximately. The main way of work here is related to service sector and it's practically obligatory to speak in english if you want to be hire. I love living in a city because I can enjoy lots of young leisure offers for example: I can go to the cinema, theater, concerts and so on. In my city the census is around 70.000 more or less, is that to say, it's not too big. The commuting is easy due to we have a fantastic public transport and the distances are close/near. As regards environment, we live in a privileged zone considering that we have a clear atmosphere, clean sea waters and enormous mountains. This place gathers an important cultural diversity such as: English, German, Chinese, etc. The only thing that I can't agree is the old aspect of the streets. I consider my town hall should make an economic effort and improve our streets. Apart from that I recommend everybody visit us. Please correct my composition :)

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my city

I live in Benidorm. It's situated on the east coast of Spain. This is the city of in Spain with more hotels per square meter than any other--about 500 approximately. [if you use the word "more," you have to say "more than...."]
The main way of work industry here is related to the service sector and it's practically obligatory to speak in English if you want to be hired.
I love living in a city because I can enjoy lots of young leisure activities offered, for example: I can go to the cinema, theater, concerts and so on. In my city the census population ["census" is just a method for counting people. You can't use that word to replace "population"] is around 70.000 more or less. That is to say, it's not too big. The commuting is easy due to the fact that we have a fantastic public transport and the distances are close/near [this is phrased awkwardly. A more natural way of saying this is "many places are close to each other" or "many places are within short distances from each other"]. As regards In regards to/Regarding the environment, we live in a privileged zone considering that we have a clear atmosphere, clean sea waters and enormous mountains. This place gathers has an important cultural diversity such as: English culture, German culture, Chinese culture, etc.

The only thing that I can't agree with is the old aspect of the streets. I consider think my town hall should make an economic effort and improve our streets. Apart from that I recommend everybody visit us.

Please correct my composition :)

thank you very much

I live in Benidorm. It's located on the east coast of Spain. This is one of the cities in Spain which have a high density of hotels about 500 per square meter approximately. The main business here is mostly related to service sector so speaking in english is an compulsory condition if you want to be hire. The thing I love about this city is that it has several public services like cinema, theater, concerts and so on. The population of the city is around 70.000. Commuting here is quite convenient thanks to a fantastic infrastructure and public transportation, so you kinda feel like every distances here are just like door-to-door. As regards environment, we live in a privileged zone considering that we have a fresh atmosphere, cleaned sea waters and also enormous mountains. This place has variety kind of cultures from all around the world, such as: English, German, Chinese, etc. The only minus point of this city is the old aspect of the streets. I recommend my town hall should make an economic effort to improve the quality of our streets. Apart from that, I think this place is a paradise and I welcome everyone around the world visiting us. I'm not an English speaker so my correction might still contain some mistakes. But I hope this could help you a bit, pal.

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