this essay is preparing for my ielts exam,could you please help me to correct it? Nowadays none of the countries have been able to survive from facing the problem of how to deal with those kind of people who have break the low. However, people hold different opinion about whether should government to put these person into prison, or there are some other method to punish or to do with these people. Before offering my opinion, I believe we need to take a glance of both side. Many people think that it is imperative for government to punish those lawbreakers by put them into prison. For one thing, this action can garenteed citizens' safe. For example, if there is a person who murdered some one, buthas not been put into the prison, then he might do another things to hurt people. For another, given that put the lawbreaker into the prison is an action to give the punishmentwich they should be bear. If the government do not put them in to the prison, it is not fair to those people who fallowing the law. Nevertheless, there are people questioning about the meaning of the punishment wich put the lawbreakers into a jail, claiming that it is not useful to those people who did not realise their mistake of the action. This is because punish a person who break the law can not make them realize their falt, when they are out of the prison they may once again to do another falt, so maybe there are some other better alternatives. For instance, to take them to an place do some meaningful activities,wich contribute the society. Judging from all the relavant evidence, I convinced that, punish is important, but compared with put the lawbreakers into the jail, it is more important for the government to make them realise the mistake that they did, and to understand they should not do those activities agian wich has break the law.