My Trip Thailand
I must say for me is very complicated to write even in my own Lenguage, writing is not one of my strong skills.
I remember when I was studing at the university I got good grades in Math or Science but never in Lenguage
not for spelling erros or punctuation marks It is because I don't know how to translate my ideas on paper so in
this case I really have to make an effort to improve my English.
Now I would like to talk about my trip to Thailand which is a grate place. Last moth I stayed there for two weeks
I Landed in Bangkok on December 22 aften Two long flights one from Barcelona to Dubai and then from Dubai to
Bangkok. The fist night I was so exhausted that I desided not to go out I just took a dip in the pool and I went to sleep.
Next day after breakfast I took a boat taxi to take me to the most important temples and the Royal Palace this one really impressed me, It is so different to any construction (building) I saw before, very luxurious and imposing.
After 3 day in Bangkok I went to Chiang Mai and Phuket but I think I had enough writing for today. I will talk about them tomorrow.
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The first night I was so exhausted that I decided not to to not go out, so I just took a dip in the pool and I went to sleep instead. The next day after breakfast I took a boat taxi to take me to the most important ("important" sounds odd here. Perhaps "beautiful" would make more sense) beautiful temples. and The Royal Palace this one really impressed me. It is so different to from any other construction (building) that I had ever seen saw before - very luxurious and imposing grand.
After 3 day in Bangkok I went to Chiang Mai and Phuket but. I think I have had enough writing for today. I will talk about them tomorrow.
Thank you for your corrections
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My Trip to Thailand
What I must say for me it is very complicated to write even in my own language, writing is not one of my strong skills.I remember when I was studying at the university I got good grades in Math or Science but never in language. It is not for spelling errors or punctuation mark, It is because I don't know how to translate my ideas on paper so in this case I really have to make an effort to improve my English.
Now I would like to talk about my trip to Thailand which is a great place. Last month I stayed there for two weeks I landed in Bangkok on December 22 after two long flights one from Barcelona to Dubai and then from Dubai to Bangkok. The fist night I was so exhausted that I decided not to go out, I just took a dive(dip is only for food) in the pool and after that, I went to sleep.
Next day after my breakfast I took a boat taxi to take me to the most important temples and the Royal Palace this one really impressed me, It is so different to any construction (building) I saw before, very luxurious and imposing.After the third day in Bangkok, I went to Chiang Mai and Phuket but I think I had enough writing for today. I will talk about them tomorrow.
Thank you for your corrections
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My Trip to Thailand
I must say, for me it is very complicated to write even in my own language - writing is not one of my strongest skills.I remember when I was studing at the university I got good grades in math or and science, but never in languages. It was not due to me making for spelling or grammatical errors or punctuation marks It is was because I don't didn't know how to translate my ideas onto paper, so in this case I really have to make an effort to improve my English.
Now I would like to talk about my trip to Thailand, which is a grate great place. Last month I stayed there for two weeks.
I Landed in Bangkok on December 22nd aftenr two long flights, one being from Barcelona to Dubai and then the other being from Dubai to Bangkok.
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My to Trip Thailand
I must say that for me it is very complicated to write, even in my own Language, writing is not one of my strong skills.I remember when I was studying at the university I got good grades in Math or Science but never in Lenguage.
It wasnt because of spelling errors or punctuation marks It was because I don't know how to translate my ideas onto paper so in
this case I really have to make an effort to improve my English.
Now I would like to talk about my trip to Thailand which is a grate place. Last moth I stayed there for two weeks and
I Landed in Bangkok on December 22 after Two long flights one from Barcelona to Dubai and then from Dubai to
Bangkok. The fist night I was so exhausted that I decided not to go out, I just took a dip in the pool and I went to sleep.
The next day after breakfast I took a boat taxi to the most important temples and the Royal Palace. This one really impressed me, it is so different to any building I had seen before, very luxurious and imposing.
After 3 days in Bangkok I went to Chiang Mai and Phuket but I think I did enough writing for today. I will talk about them tomorrow.
Thank you for your corrections
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