IELTS Letter - 26/01
Hi everybody. I am studying to take the IELTS test. I am practicing the writing task, so I wrote the following letter. I would appreciate any correction or comment to write it better.
You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ivan Fernandez and I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the laptop I bought fifteen days ago.
The laptop worked just fine for the first week. However, I began to experience some connection intermittencies when I tried to connect to any WiFi network. These intermittencies become more frequent, coming to the point where I could not connect through WiFi anymore. I read the user’s manual and tried the troubleshooting process described there, although it did not worked. I called to the client support line and the agent who took my call suggested me restore to factory settings. I reset the laptop to factory settings but the issue was not resolved. At this point, I would like a full refund or change for another brand new laptop of different brand and model.
I am looking forward for your communication and a response to my request.
Yours faithfully,
Ivan Fernandez
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 8
1
IELTS Letter - 26/01
Hi everybody. I am studying to take the IELTS test. I am practicing the writing task, so I wrote the following letter. I would appreciate any correction or comment to write it better.You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ivan Fernandez and I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the laptop I bought fifteen days ago.
The laptop worked just fine for the first week. However, I began to experience some intermittent connection problems intermittencies when I tried to connect to any WiFi network. These intermittencies problems become more frequent, coming to the point where I could not connect through WiFi anymore. I read the user’s manual and tried the troubleshooting process described there, although it did not worked. I called to the client customer support line and the agent who took my call suggested that I reset me restore to factory settings. I reset the laptop to factory settings but the issue was not resolved. At this point, I would like a full refund or exchange for another brand new laptop of different brand and model.
I am looking forward to for your communication and a response to my request.
Sincerely, Yours faithfully,
Ivan Fernandez
1
IELTS Letter - 26/01
Hi, everybody. I am studying to take the IELTS test. I am practicing the writing task, so I wrote the following letter. I would appreciate any correction or comment to write it better.You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ivan Fernandez and I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the laptop I bought fifteen days ago.
The laptop worked just fine for the first week. However, I began to experience some connection intermittencies when I tried to connect to any WiFi network. These intermittencies become more frequent, coming to the point where I could not connect through WiFi anymore. I read the user’s manual and tried the troubleshooting process described there, although it did not work. I called to the client support line and the agent who took my call suggested me restore to factory settings. I reset the laptop to factory settings but the issue was not resolved. At this point, I would like a full refund or change for another brand new laptop of different brand and model.
I am looking forward to your communication and a response to my request.
Yours faithfully,
Ivan Fernandez
Congratulation Camilo and good luck for you IELTS exams
1
IELTS Letter - 26/01
Hi everybody. I am studying to take the IELTS test. I am practicing the writing task, so I wrote the following letter. I would appreciate any correction or comment to write it better.You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ivan Fernandez and I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the laptop I bought fifteen days ago.
The laptop worked just fine for the first week. However, I began to experience some connection intermittencies when I tried to connect to any WiFi network. These intermittencies became more frequent, coming to the point where I could not connect through WiFi anymore. I read the user’s manual and tried the troubleshooting process described there, although it did not worked. I called to the client support line and the agent who took my call suggested me that I restore to factory settings. I reset the laptop to factory settings but the issue was not resolved. At this point, I would like a full refund or change for to be able to exchange my laptop with another brand new laptop of a different brand and model.
I am looking forward for to your communication and a response to my request.
Yours faithfully,
Ivan Fernandez
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
